Tweaks.

diff --git a/lib/ZOOM.pod b/lib/ZOOM.pod
index 908bba5..fd8abbf 100644 (file)
--- a/lib/ZOOM.pod
+++ b/lib/ZOOM.pod
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# $Id: ZOOM.pod,v 1.32 2006-04-11 16:38:38 mike Exp $
+# $Id: ZOOM.pod,v 1.33 2006-04-11 16:40:08 mike Exp $

 
 use strict;
 use warnings;
 
 use strict;
 use warnings;

@@ -1377,12 +1377,12 @@ The approach is as follows:
 
 Create several connections to the various servers, each of them having
 the option C<async> set, and with whatever additional options are
 
 Create several connections to the various servers, each of them having
 the option C<async> set, and with whatever additional options are

-required - e.g. setting the piggyback retrieval record-count so that
-records will be returned in search responses.
+required - e.g. the piggyback retrieval record-count can be set so
+that records will be returned in search responses.

 
 =item Operations
 
 
 =item Operations
 

-Send searches to the connections, request record retrieval, etc.
+Send searches to the connections, request records, etc.

 
 =item Event harvesting
 
 
 =item Event harvesting
 

@@ -1391,8 +1391,8 @@ received from the servers.  Each time this function returns, it
 indicates which of the connections has fired; this connection can then
 be interrogated with the C<last_event()> method to discover what event
 has occurred, and the return value - an element of the C<ZOOM::Event>
 indicates which of the connections has fired; this connection can then
 be interrogated with the C<last_event()> method to discover what event
 has occurred, and the return value - an element of the C<ZOOM::Event>

-enumeration can be used to determine what to do next.  For example,
-the C<ZEND> operation indicates that no further operations are
+enumeration - can be tested to determine what to do next.  For
+example, the C<ZEND> event indicates that no further operations are

 outstanding on the connection, so any fetched records can now be
 immediately obtained.
 
 outstanding on the connection, so any fetched records can now be
 immediately obtained.