-However, doing so reveals the the credentials to public view -- to
-anyone who does View Source on the MKWS application. This may be
-acceptable for some libraries, but is intolerable for those which
-provide authenticated access to subscription resources. For such
-circumstances, a more elaborate approach is necessary. The idea is to
-make a local URL that is used for authentication onto the Service
-Proxy, hiding the credentials, and to use local mechanisms to limit
-access to that local authentication URL. Here is one way to do it when
-Apache2 is the application's web-server, which we will call
+In these circumstances, a more elaborate approach is necessary. The
+idea is to make a local URL that is used for authentication onto the
+Service Proxy, hiding the credentials, and to use local mechanisms to
+limit access to that local authentication URL. Here is one way to do
+it when Apache2 is the application's web-server, which we will call